Shark Tank Proposal

    After watching my Shark Tank Proposal speech, I can honestly say that I did better than I expected.  Before I watched my proposal speech, I thought that I didn’t present my speech well and that I couldn’t get the idea of my documentary out there. But after watching my proposal speech, I realized that I had no reason to doubt myself, and that I did my best and I am very proud of myself for being able to present the speech the way I did. Of course there are still some points I need to work on; for starters, the speed and tone of my voice, I realized that when I am nervous I tend to speak faster than I normally should and that the tone of my voice starts to become shaky, which makes me more nervous. One other thing that I noticed and was unaware of while giving my speech was that I stayed in my place, when I should have walked around a bit, not pacing but I should have taken slight movements. I am glad that I was able to present my points clearly, some of the points were vague and I could have explained them more clearly but the idea was there.

   For my next speech, three things I would like to focus on are, the speed and tone of my voice, the movements I should take while giving a speech and the way I should present some points.  Hopefully for my next speech, I would have practiced on the things that needed more focus on, which will help me in giving a better speech.